Improving your storyboarding work

You need to do more work to your storyboards regarding the addition of visuals: you need to add more still images and moving visuals to your storyboards/scripts.

You must re-draft your storyboards so that the images really match the lines. For example, for the line, 'Hi, I'm John and unlike the rest of you, and the rest of Coopers', I don't like school.' The image could be: "Eye-line shot of John, then the word 'you', then the Coopers' logo, then a mid-shot of John putting his thumbs down.'

In other words, your work needs to be much more visual and detailed. Tell as much as the story as you can through visuals, and be much more precise in your scripts.